This story is likely going to revolve around Jesse, since Winnie is already dead. I am only on the first chapter, and I know where I'm going to take the story, but I'm not going to tell you here. You can wait and buy my book..... If I ever finish it. Here's what I have written so far:
It had been many
years since the death of Winnie Foster.
Jesse Tuck had mourned all those years, and had never even searched for
a new love interest. He was stuck on Winnie. Jesse had known, 10 years after he
said good bye to Winnie, that she was never coming. He figured she had
forgotten him. But Winnie Foster didn’t forget. In fact, Winnie told the story
to her kids, who told it to their kids, who told it to their kids. Jesse never
even thought of trying to find Winnie’s relatives. He never thought about
marrying one of them. He could only think of why Winnie hadn’t come.
Jesse was
currently in a city called Redfield. He was looking for a job. He had been out
of work for about 10 years now, just living off of the streets. He couldn’t
even remember what year it was. Redfield was a major city, almost like NYC. It
was raining out, and if there was one thing Jesse hated, it was rain. He
groaned. He had wanted to find a newspaper stand- if that was what they were called-
and find out the year. Now he trudged into a diner, where a lot of people came
to have coffee, read, work, or wait for the train. He sat down at a booth and
waited for a waitress to take his order.
Presently, one
came. Jesse read her name tag. Her name was Ruth. “May I take your order sir?”
she asked politely. “Yea, I’ll take a sandwich with cheese, ham, and a little
bit of mustard on it. And what year is it?” Jesse inquired. “2012,” Ruth replied. “Is that
all?” “Yup. Do you have a newspaper I could look at?” he asked. “Sure,” Ruth
said, handing him one from the counter. “Your sandwich will be out in a second.”
Jesse took the paper and gazed at the ‘Job Wanted’ section. He saw that there
was an opening for a cook at this very diner. “Hmm,” he thought to himself. “If
the pay is good, I just might take this job!”
Ruth set down his
sandwich. “Here you go,” she said. “Thanks,” he replied. He hesitated before
asking “May I talk to the manager?” Ruth looked absolutely alarmed. “Is the
food bad? What is it?” she asked. “I was considering the job,” Jesse answered. “Oh,”
said Ruth, looking relieved. “Right this way.” Jesse entered the manager’s
office.
It was a small room, with a desk and chair. Behind the desk was an
older woman. Her tag said Mrs. Delven. “Here about the job opening?” she asked,
without looking up from her computer. “Yes,” said Jesse. “How much is the pay?”
Mrs. Delven looked up at him. “I pay my employees with what I feel they have earned,
no more, no less. There is no set payment.” “Oh,” said Jesse. “That’s what
everyone says,” muttered Mrs. Delven. “That’s why it’s so hard to get employees.
Will you take the job or not?!?” “Sure,” said Jesse. “Good. Come to work
tomorrow at 8:00a.m. Your shift begins then,” she said.
Pretty good, huh? I am hoping to finish it soon- but if not, I have something I can do with my spare time. I sure hope I can finish it ... I think I can, I just have to work really hard at it. I hope you liked reading the little bit of my story that I have written.
Maddie
Awesome writing, Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love you.
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